Luke Revision Finished

Finished-sort of. I did read through my second half of the book today, penciling in corrections. It took about six hours and the time just flew. I almost cried at the black moment, it was so sad. So I’m thinking my conflict fix worked. No doubt next read through I will disagree and try to amp things up even more. But for now I’ll just type in the corrections and call it a day. Or a weekend as the case may be. I hope to have this one filed away by Monday morning. Then on to revising The Paris Notebook again!