Whew! Just sent in my revised and edited manuscript of The Paris Notebook. This morning I made a few last minute changes. It’s really difficult to keep my hands off of the words, but honestly, it was the best I could make it as far as smoothing out the prose and especially getting rid of passive voice.
I did what I could with Jack. With the help of Tom, the newest member of my critique group, he’s much more swoon-worthy. So that’s it. We’ll see what the editor thinks.
Cynthia Harrison 
Best of luck with the submission! I have every confidence that they’ll love it!
(and yay, Tom! for helping you out with the hero)
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Well good because I don’t. lol. Thanks Martha!
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It will be interesting to see what the editor makes of your changes.
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Like so many things, letting go of that manuscript must have been hard but it sounds like it was time. Good luck!
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