Whew! Just sent in my revised and edited manuscript of The Paris Notebook. This morning I made a few last minute changes. It’s really difficult to keep my hands off of the words, but honestly, it was the best I could make it as far as smoothing out the prose and especially getting rid of passive voice.
I did what I could with Jack. With the help of Tom, the newest member of my critique group, he’s much more swoon-worthy. So that’s it. We’ll see what the editor thinks.