Finished reading through Attracting Jack and updating all the many many pop culture references. Took out a couple of going nowhere scenes. Could probably scratch a couple more. But surprise! It was actually better that I thought it would be, still a little sloppy here and there & needs a bit of work, but hey not bad for a ten year old concept.
The whole idea for the story still holds up, and maybe works even better now. So, when I get back from vacation, the plan is to type in revisions and do some deepening and smoothing out with the characters. I’m thinking this will take maybe a week, because really, everything I have to do is all there in my notes.
And then I can send it out.