Progression of Events
Got the book outlined and act 1 finished. And started act 2. The first scene in act 2 is really really bad. But it will get me where I’m going and you can’t fix a blank page. Act 1, which I read through over the weekend, is decent, altough I have three pov characters and only two of them feel real to me. The guy seems weird and his motivation feels messy and I don’t know why my character should love him. Also he is not mean enough, but if he’s too macho she really shouldn’t love him. And sadly, she does. So I’ll have to fix that character somehow, but the other stuff seems to all work well. And I like all the plotting ideas for act 2. I just wish I could write a scene I’m happy with. I think I will go back and revise that really horribly written scene tomorrow.